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Laughter rolled through the living room during a Christmas party after someone had told one of my twins a joke. Everyone laughed, adults and children. Except—one of my twins, Ryan, who has Asperger’s. He slanted a look in my direction, shoulders stiff and uncertainty in his blue-gray eyes. I wrinkled my nose and shook my head to help him realize the man had told a joke. Then, Ryan let out a small laugh and said, “oh.”
Technically, he got the joke (albeit a bit late). But his tendencies toward Asperger’s wire his brain so those subtle nuances that make the joke really funny aren’t there and the enjoyment is lost to him.
Such is the way with some writers. Technically, their work is flawless. But their stories lack the subtle nuances that make it sing!
A while back, a friend asked me to read over her story and tell her what I thought she could improve or fix to make it better, more sellable. Normally, I won’t do this because we each have our own styles and finding a critique partner who “gets” you and whom you “get” can be as difficult as buying a home. But I wanted to help, so I agreed.
When I finished reading the scenes she’d sent, I sat back and grunted to myself. Something was missing. But for the life of me, I wasn’t sure what. She had POV down pat. A fairly good balance of showing/telling. Characterization was decent. Emotional elements could’ve been beefed up but weren’t bad. So, I read the chapters again.
Finally, it dawned on me as I did the read-through, “There’s no heart.”
And that missing “heart” in her story caused the technically perfect elements to be as dull as a grimy mirror. It’s still a mirror. But without the spit and polish of voice and style, without the flare of individuality, there was no reflection of the author, only stiff guidelines. Much like my son, who is often stiff and stoic (but the guy is really charming, let me tell you!).
The key is to first know and master the mechanics and the rules of good fiction. Get them down so you know them in your sleep, so well you can’t write without realizing you’ve shifted POVs, that this doesn’t sound in character with the hero, etc. Once you’ve got them mastered, recognize that you’ve got it mastered. Accept that you know when it’s right and when it’s wrong. At this point, it’s okay to occasionally break a rule if it really accents something in the story. It’s important not to look to break rules just so you can say your work is “edgy” or “outside the norm.”
Now that you’ve allowed yourself to break a rule or two, ask yourself how can you “relax” the technical aspect so that more of your voice, more of your style comes out. Do you find when you write, say action (like me!) that the flow is better and stronger? Or perhaps when you’re unveiling a beautiful romantic moment, that’s when you are completely immersed in the story?
Capitalize on those elements that are your strong suit, and make them work for you! For example, my strength has always been in action and adventure. I’ve found that those scenes tend to just roll off my fingertips and are laced with so much excitement that they are penned in seconds (okay, it feels like seconds!). Other types of scenes, like the romance, like “domestic” scenes, are not as easy for me to write. In fact, I used to joke about how they gave me hives or how I was allergic to them.
Putting the heart in your story is as much about you, the author, as it is the story. Without you, without this amazing idea and concept you have, the story won’t be the same. In fact, the imperfections that are unique to you will be what keeps your readers coming back for more!
Just as a grimy, blurred mirror image isn’t quite you. Just as my son Ryan, with his Aspie tendencies, is uniquely imperfect with his rigidity of thought yet so amazingly perfect because, simply, he’s my son! So, embrace your skills, hone your weaker areas, release the reins a bit—it does not have to be technically perfect—and infuse that story with heart!
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