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Friday, May 31, 2013

Creating Compelling Characters: Know Their Past... Beth Vogt

Creating Compelling Characters: 
Know Their Past to Write Their Now

by Beth Vogt

As I crossed over from the nonfiction side of the writing road to the fiction side – a.k.a. the Dark Side – I needed to master new rules of the road. Even as a novice novelist, I knew a can’t-put-it-down book needs compelling characters. But how did I go about developing captivating imaginary people? I found an online “character questionnaire,” pages and pages of getting-to-know-you information deemed vital to my hero and heroine.

When I was done filling in the blanks, I had a severe case of writer’s cramp, a worn-out favorite pen, and all sorts of Intel about my main characters: birth dates, professions, political affiliations, church denominations, favorite snack foods, favorite colors, favorite movies … you get the idea.

I was ready for a game of character trivia – and nothing more.

My Book Therapy, best-selling author Susan May Warren’s writing community, provided the first key to developing true-to-life characters: the Dark Moment. The Dark Moment is a specific negative event in your character’s past that shapes them into the person they are today, i.e. at the beginning of your novel.

Why is the Dark Moment so important to developing your hero and heroine? The Dark Moment leads to a:
  • Wound which causes them to act a certain way
  • Lie that they believe is true (usually some sort of lie about themselves)

How to develop the Dark Moment

When you mull over your character’s past, their Dark Moment has to be s-p-e-c-i-f-i-c. You can’t just say, “My hero had a rough childhood” or “My heroine feels like her father doesn’t love her.” You need to know why the character says and does the things they do – and to accomplish that, you have to go back to the Dark Moment and experience it with your character. When you write out the Dark Moment, include things like:

  • Date How old was your character when the Dark Moment happened? Hint: It should happen early in their life no later than the end of high school or very early college. The Dark Moment event has to influence who your character becomes, so they have to be young enough for the event to shape their personality and beliefs.
  • People Who was involved in the Dark Moment?
  • Location Where was your character when the Dark Moment happened?
  • Details What happened? Add in Storyworld, five senses and dialogue.
  • Results Why was the Dark Moment so hurtful to your character?

Here’s an example of how you could be specific about a heroine’s Dark Moment: When Adele Smith was 12, her family vacationed in Destin, FL. Her parents told her to keep an eye on Jill, her 6-year-old sister. They were playing in the waves – and Adele was watching the cute lifeguard – and before she knew it, they both got caught in a riptide. The lifeguard rescued Adele – but Jill drowned. 
Dark Moment, yes? I would go into even more detail if I were plotting an actual novel, but for the sake of today’s word count, I kept it brief. Even so, I did hit date, people, location, details and results.
The Dark Moment is powerful because it affects your character – they say the things they say, make certain choices – because of that particular negative past experience.
The Power of the Dark Moment
Why is the Dark Moment such a potent way to create gripping characters? Because we are taking a real-life truth and weaving it into our fiction. Each of us has our own Dark Moment – a hurtful experience that influences who we are today. Here’s an example I often share during writers workshops:
In 2007, I had a life-threatening illness. My husband, who is a family physician, shut down his practice for a number of days, and took care of me at home so that I didn’t have to be admitted to the hospital. I was so sick that he rarely left my side. What we didn’t realize at the time was that our then six-year-old daughter sat outside our bedroom door, waiting for him to come out and tell her that I had died. 
Dark Moment? For my daughter, yes.
Six years later, she is still affected by that event. When we found out what had happened (and we only found out about it two years ago) we talked with her, prayed with her. The memory influences her actions when I get sick now or when I leave for a conference. She worries. She gets tearful. And as her parents, we have to remind her of the truth that we can trust God with my life – and with hers.
Is it fun to weave quirky things into your novel? Absolutely! In my just-released novel, Catch a Falling Star, both of my main characters are Jeep lovers, a fact I used to bring them together – and push them apart. I’ve written a character who has a linen closet full of OPI nail polish and another who noshes on beef jerky. But I’ve learned to go past these details and get to the heart of my characters so that my readers care about them.
What about you? When you start your novel on page one, chapter one, have you figured out what experiences in your main characters’  past have made them the (imaginary) people they are when your readers meet them

Beth K. Vogt knows all about her plans and God’s plans not being the same. There was a time when as a non-fiction author and editor, she said she’d never write fiction. She’s the wife of an Air Force physician (now in solo practice) who said she’d never marry a doctor or anyone in the military. She’s a mom of four who said she’d never have kids. Vogt has discovered that God’s best often waits behind the doors marked “Never.”

Released earlier this month, Catch a Falling Star is her second novel, following her fiction debut Wish You Were Here, which hit bookstore shelves last year.

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  1. This is AWESOME, Beth. Finding that dark moment, really fleshing it out and uncovering how it has shaped our makes all the difference. And in both your books, your characters' dark moments add dimension and pave the way for such profound spiritual truth. Love it!

  2. Excellent! Thanks for sharing, Beth.

  3. I'm glad this post is helpful to others. I know learning about the importance of the Dark Moment -- and how to craft it -- helped me develop my characters too. Just one of the many techniques I gleaned from My Book Therapy.

  4. This is so helpful, Beth, but also a bit overwhelming. Of course, that's because I'm on the nonfiction side and looking over into new territory. I don't do change well, but if I ever do cross over, this is one resource I'll come back to again and again. I also like your examples - brought the post to life. Thanks for sharing.

    1. Kim,
      I can understand the "overwhelming" feeling. There were times I wanted to bolt from the "Dark Side" back to the safety of the non-fiction side of the writing road. Any new writing tool feels uncomfortable at first and takes time and practice to feel comfortable.

  5. This is great! I tried one of those character development pages, and I didn't work for me. I much prefer this simple, two step method. I think when you begin with this, the character will then develop.

    1. Joan, I'm glad you were helped by the post. Once you discover the Dark Moment, you add more layers with the Wound and Lie ... which allows you to create a multi-layered character. I like doing this all before the actual story writing process -- and tweaking as I go.

  6. Great post. I had not thought about this before but as I reading this I was thinking about the characters I love and seeing that they had dark moments. Excellent advice.

  7. Hi, Sally! Are you all recovered from BRMCWC (unpacked and back to your normal routine?). Glad we had a chance to connect there -- and glad you were able to see your characters' Dark Moments.

  8. Beth, thank you SO MUCH for sharing this helpful info with us. Those first chapters are SO important to nail, and you have given us a template to follow. Thank you!!!


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